Kia Ora Alex, You talking about that magic box got me very interested in what you have in your mind, just amazing. So a Snake, 100,000,000 foot long bee, Pounamu and a pan that has been bumped, I just don't believe it. I must say that that piece of writing made me laugh aloud in the inside. Next time Alex I think you should add punctuation just to spice it up a bit.
Kia Ora Alex my name is Levi C from Grey Main School. I like how your telling me about your magic box poem. I think it's Ka mau wehi (Awesome) Maybe next time you could work on some more capital letters. Did you enjoy making a poem?
Kia ora my name is Regan from Grey Main School. I like your work, it is really interesting and really good. Keep the good work up. Maybe next time put some more photos in.
Kia Ora Alex,
ReplyDeleteYou talking about that magic box got me very interested in what you have in your mind, just amazing. So a Snake, 100,000,000 foot long bee, Pounamu and a pan that has been bumped, I just don't believe it. I must say that that piece of writing made me laugh aloud in the inside.
Next time Alex I think you should add punctuation just to spice it up a bit.
Kia Ora Alex my name is Levi C from Grey Main School. I like how your telling me about your magic box poem. I think it's Ka mau wehi (Awesome) Maybe next time you could work on some more capital letters. Did you enjoy making a poem?
ReplyDeleteKia ora my name is Regan from Grey Main School. I like your work, it is really interesting and really good. Keep the good work up. Maybe next time put some more photos in.
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