Tuesday 5 June 2018

Best Part Of Me

Learning Intentions
I am learning to use language features to make my writing interesting and engaging for the reader.
I am learning to think carefully about the words I use so that my writing is descriptive and engaging for the reader.
I am learning to add an appropriate visual to my work

I will be successful when I can show….
-I have used some language features to make my writing interesting and engaging (smile, metaphor, alliteration, onomatopoeia, rhyme)
-I have carefully chosen some interesting words to include in my writing
-I have some descriptive words in my writing (adjectives)
-I have added a photo to my writing


My hands   


My hands are like hidden hands. I like to hide them. I don’t know why? My hands like to be quiet, hidden in my sleeves. My hands come out when I’m writing. They come out like a tortoise coming out of its shell.

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