My name is Leisha Ferguson and I am with the Summer Learning Journey. I live in Auckland and I am part of the team that will be commenting on your blog posts over the summer. I am really looking forward to getting to know you and reading your interesting blogs :)
You have created an awesome slideshow with some great facts about The Water Project. Please remember that these activities require you to use your own words and not just taking sentences from the internet. I would love to hear in your own words what you personally think about The Water Project :)
Keep up your blog posts over this teaser week and get ready to start with Week 1 of the Summer Learning Journey on Monday 16th December. I cannot wait to see what your next blog post will be about!
My name is Allie and I am the cluster manager for the Summer Learning Journey. Great that you have been doing some activities for the teaser week. You are doing a great job, but I just want to remind you that all the activities need to be in your own words. You can't copy the words directly from a website and put them on your blog. This is called plagiarism. I can tell with this one by the words that you have used. You have use 'mom' instead of 'mum' which is the american spelling. During the actual SLJ you would not get points for this unless you changed it into your own words. I really hope that you will blog with us over the summer we are all looking forward to reading your work. We can also see that your work is the same as Wyatt's work. It is ok if you are going to work together on a post, you just need to let us know that.
Enjoy the rest of the school year and have a great summer holiday.
Kia ora Alex,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Leisha Ferguson and I am with the Summer Learning Journey. I live in Auckland and I am part of the team that will be commenting on your blog posts over the summer. I am really looking forward to getting to know you and reading your interesting blogs :)
You have created an awesome slideshow with some great facts about The Water Project. Please remember that these activities require you to use your own words and not just taking sentences from the internet. I would love to hear in your own words what you personally think about The Water Project :)
Keep up your blog posts over this teaser week and get ready to start with Week 1 of the Summer Learning Journey on Monday 16th December. I cannot wait to see what your next blog post will be about!
Leisha :)
Hi Alex
ReplyDeleteMy name is Allie and I am the cluster manager for the Summer Learning Journey. Great that you have been doing some activities for the teaser week. You are doing a great job, but I just want to remind you that all the activities need to be in your own words. You can't copy the words directly from a website and put them on your blog. This is called plagiarism. I can tell with this one by the words that you have used. You have use 'mom' instead of 'mum' which is the american spelling.
During the actual SLJ you would not get points for this unless you changed it into your own words.
I really hope that you will blog with us over the summer we are all looking forward to reading your work.
We can also see that your work is the same as Wyatt's work. It is ok if you are going to work together on a post, you just need to let us know that.
Enjoy the rest of the school year and have a great summer holiday.
Allie :)